love is ...
My love is still...
My love is idle...
But no less strong.
Something lacks,
Something's amiss,
The spark has gone,
The excitement dimmed.
But our love, no less strong!
There are times when my life seems meaningless without him...
There are times when i doubt the meaning of my life with him...
Understandtanding seems what our relation's built on,
Yet times arise when i doubt he understands me at all.
But our love, no less strong!
We claim to know each other wholly...
But do i really know him?
What is he thinking of at this very moment?
I have to admit...
I know him of how much he allows me to.
But our love, no less strong!
Is this love?
So i have come to believe...
Coz when the doubts creep in...
A mere glance into his eyes...
A mere sound of his hello...
Turns my insides upside down.
Then...
All the frivolous doubts vanish from my mind,
All the moments of lovelessness erased from my memories...
My belief carries me on...
Our love is no less strong!
4 Comments:
thnx manju dear..ur my inspiration for my work!!great job to u too
Hey, that was a really wonderful poem. I am no one to judge anyone's ability but i really enjoyed reading it.
good poornima...!!!!
I really loved the revolutionary poetic style..it is bold and precise..
The 2 long lines..that defines the soul of ur poem...gud wrk
Keep going my sis...
Good!
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